I like the feeling of movement in that one.
I hope that you do post more as you run into them. 
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| Author: | aTOMiC [ Mon Feb 26, 2007 12:03 pm ] |
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| Author: | Duchess of Malfi [ Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:50 pm ] |
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I like the feeling of movement in that one. I hope that you do post more as you run into them.
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| Author: | Avatar [ Fri Mar 02, 2007 4:18 am ] |
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| Author: | aTOMiC [ Mon Mar 05, 2007 11:24 am ] |
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| Author: | Avatar [ Mon Mar 05, 2007 11:43 am ] |
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| Author: | Duchess of Malfi [ Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:28 pm ] |
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| Author: | Avatar [ Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:38 am ] |
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Yeah, I've never paid attention to any of that. As long as it flows, it's good. --A |
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| Author: | Lucimay [ Wed Mar 07, 2007 2:02 am ] |
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yeah tom, what they said. *thumbs up* nice one. do it again! 
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| Author: | aTOMiC [ Wed Mar 07, 2007 6:00 pm ] |
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Thanks Luci/Duchess/Av, I found another short piece of poetry. This is probably all I've got unless I write something new. No telling if the mood will ever strike me again but for what its worth... Did I actually use the word "crepuscular"?
a walk in the rain darkness rules silence a distant flash the day returns, fleeting the roar of the heavens darkness rules droplets filled with fury, angered by descent the crackle draws near the world revealed flames survive and die darkness rules buildings creak the eager wind thrilled crepuscular gloom a sudden flash the heavens roar echo of doom hushed breath darkness rules darkness rules |
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| Author: | Avatar [ Thu Mar 08, 2007 6:00 am ] |
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| Author: | Lucimay [ Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:31 pm ] |
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