A POEM - Don't be so suprised.

Duchess of Malfi · **Posted:** Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:50 pm

I like the feeling of movement in that one.

I hope that you do post more as you run into them.

Avatar · **Posted:** Fri Mar 02, 2007 4:18 am

aTOMiC · **Posted:** Mon Mar 05, 2007 11:24 am

Avatar · **Posted:** Mon Mar 05, 2007 11:43 am

Duchess of Malfi · **Posted:** Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:28 pm

Avatar · **Posted:** Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:38 am

Yeah, I've never paid attention to any of that. As long as it flows, it's good.

--A

Lucimay · **Joined:** Mon Jan 30, 2006 9:14 pm **Posts:** 41

yeah tom, what they said. *thumbs up* nice one. do it again!

aTOMiC · **Posted:** Wed Mar 07, 2007 6:00 pm

Thanks Luci/Duchess/Av, I found another short piece of poetry. This is probably all I've got unless I write something new. No telling if the mood will ever strike me again but for what its worth...
Did I actually use the word "crepuscular"? :-)

a walk in the rain

darkness rules
silence
a distant flash
the day returns, fleeting
the roar of the heavens
darkness rules
droplets filled with fury, angered by descent
the crackle draws near
the world revealed
flames survive and die
darkness rules
buildings creak
the eager wind thrilled
crepuscular gloom
a sudden flash
the heavens roar
echo of doom
hushed breath
darkness rules

darkness rules

Avatar · **Posted:** Thu Mar 08, 2007 6:00 am

Lucimay · **Joined:** Mon Jan 30, 2006 9:14 pm **Posts:** 41

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